Reflection on Project 2 Draft

I provided comments for both Charles and Michael's drafts of Project 2. I found this project to be very interesting to read from an outsider's perspective.

Reynolds, Paul. "Kitten and Partial Reflection." 10/17/15 via wikimedia. Attribution 2.0

My Draft

Thesis
My peer reviewers liked my thesis and found it very easily when reading. I think it clearly identifies the tools used by the author and talks about its effectiveness.

Organization
The central ideas of each paragraph were easily found by my peer reviewers and it was organized in a way that emphasizes the most effective tools and links them all together. 

Rhetorical strategies
I made the rhetorical strategies of my text the stars and focus of my paragraphs. I clearly identified them and supported them with textual evidence. I explained and analyzed why they were used and the overall effect.

Evidence
My evidence includes both paraphrase and direct quotation. Each piece of evidence is embedded correctly and analyzed thoroughly. I use the pieces of evidence thoughtfully to support my assertions about the rhetorical tools.

Conclusion

My conclusion not only sums up my argument but also augments my thesis to make it more relevant to the current debate as a whole. I think it leaves readers with important thoughts and opinions.