Paragraph Analysis 2

In this post, I will provide a link to the copy of my project that I used for paragraph analysis. It can be accessed here. I will base my analysis off of the guidelines covered in Rules for Writers Chp. 4.

Fernandes, Rui. "Girl writing." 10/17/15 via flickr. Attribution 2.0.

Reflection
My draft's strengths lie in organization and development. Every paragraph flows in a direction that makes sense logically and is easy for readers to follow. Also, every main point is developed with good, specific textual examples and relevant analysis. I think that my essay could benefit from better transitions between some of the paragraphs. Only one of my paragraphs has a really strong transition.