Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

Valued Peer Editors,
My topic deals with technology and physical transformation in film making, and contains a lot of specific references to various movies. Even if you can't understand all of the references, that should not affect your ability to understand the work as a whole. If it does, please let me know and I will try to amend my piece. 

As you read, please make sure I am:

• making strong, clear analytical claims
• backing said claims up with reasonable evidence
• drawing good conclusions from claims + evidence
• not relying on a cheesy ending

Thank you! You can access and comment on my draft here.

Brenn, Moyan."Happiness." 10/12/15 via wikimedia. CC Attribution 2.0