Draft of Open Letter

In this post, I will be hyperlinking my draft of Project 4. 

Morris, Russ. "Thank You." 12/5/15 via flickr. Some Rights Reserved.

Dear peer reviewers,
HERE is my draft for your reviewing pleasure.
Please keep the following in mind as you look it over.

• Am I being too honest in some parts? I know that that is the tone we are going for with this piece, but I'm worried it comes off like overkill in some parts
• Do I need more references to previous work? I'll do some direct quotation in the future to support my hyperlinking, but do I need more references in general? If so, where?
• It's already pretty long at about 3 pgs. I think as I add more information I could easily get to 4-4 1/2 pgs. 
• Do I need a stronger send-off?

Thank you! You guys always provide such useful commentary to my work.