Saturday, November 7, 2015

Draft of Public Argument

Collins, Jen. "Thank you." 11/7/15 via flickr. Some Rights Reserved.
Esteemed peer editors,
While my project is a video project, I can only present to you a finalized script at this time. I am doing the filming in the next couple of days as I have just received my camera from home. Please look over my lines to see if everything is coherent, point out any weak spots and maybe give me some general advice as to where you would like to see me go with the script moving forward. I will have a completed video soon, and if you felt so inclined as to return to my project at a later date,watch it, and give some small comments I would greatly appreciate it :)

-Ann Emilie

You can access my script by clicking here

***UPDATE!*** I have removed my draft so as not to have two copies on my channel :) To see the finalized video, check out my blog post titled "Publishing Public Argument"

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  1. Here is the link to my peer review of your project!
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ci3tziWqu4YOXAk7-eBZMoJ1MQWJtbDxGJykR-ti-OA/edit?usp=sharing

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